AlexLovesRock Posted April 21, 2012 Posted April 21, 2012 I'm not the greatest lyric or song writer ever but it is something that i like to do so i'm gonna post a few bits and pieces i wrote: (not entire songs just like a verse or a chorus that i like) NEED SOME HELP: Fuck it i don't know why i'm trying, You'll never know i'm lying, I need some help, Can't find myself. SAINTS UNDER GODS: We obey their laws and rules, Let them guide our every move, But what if they weren't there? What if they didn't care? What if we weren't simply, Saints under gods. SING IT LOUD: Several knives, So many lives, say it know, Sing it loud! We fell so dar from nowhere, We know we aren't to spare, But we gotta secret, Believe me we'll keep it from you! So strong yet so easily BROKEN, So weak yet we're keeping on LIVING, So hopeless so thoughtless so can't believe i'm heading on out (out out out) Just can't believe i'm heading on out (out out out) Can't carry on finding myself.
Ghostface Killah Posted April 22, 2012 Posted April 22, 2012 It's decent man, but word of advice: expand your vocabulary. That way you can express yourself better.
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