Capn_Chantal Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 Self Questioning Tell me why they all left me? My friends, my family... I never imagined that this world could possibly get any darker For without them, I feel empty. Emptier then I have ever been in my entire life It's simply like since there is no them, no me should exist either No more life worth living Just going on using up borrowed time Time from a person that isn't even me anymore How did they expect me to go on without them? Why would they think that I would ever be that strong, as to be able to live with them no longer by my side? To hold up my own, the world resting on my shoulders With the weight of knowing that they were no longer with...me. No more laughter from them that I enjoyed so much No more wise advice that kept me living and hoping for tomorrow No more loving smiles that kept my heart beating And no more feelings of not being totally and completely alone Tell me. Try to make me understand why they are gone. Show me. The reason for why they were ripped from my life... Explain it to me slowly... please... -Those Echoes Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
endofgreen15 Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 Wow! That is deep and I like it very much! You should post your writing on here more often! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Capn_Chantal Posted September 16, 2011 Author Share Posted September 16, 2011 Thanks for liking my work And as for posting more, I'll try. Once I get over my writer's block, that is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Guest TiffehRipzUrHeartOutUchiha Posted September 16, 2011 Share Posted September 16, 2011 Wow that is amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Capn_Chantal Posted September 16, 2011 Author Share Posted September 16, 2011 thanks Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
MichealaSweetest_Scars Posted October 22, 2011 Share Posted October 22, 2011 i agree. this is amazing Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
XxDeadlyxXVX Posted October 22, 2011 Share Posted October 22, 2011 Love it! Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Malora_Melody Posted November 27, 2011 Share Posted November 27, 2011 i love this too. it's really awesome :3 Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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