jacob c(: Posted October 5, 2011 Posted October 5, 2011 (edited) A song I wrote after listening to If It Means A Lot To You - A day to remember This Is Our Night Verse 1 Hey, how you doing I know your working hard You know I want the best for you Tonight you seem so far And you know I'll be with you Don't cry to sleep tonight And one day I swear I'll be their by your side Chorus If I held your hand Could you walk away Or if I kissed your face Would you turn a to me and say I need you here, please don't walk away I breath you in, and I'm here to stay I don't want to be alone, so hold me tight Oh please just stay with me, baby this is our night Yeah this is our night Verse 2 These are the two longest days of my life I haven't heard from you, I act like every things alright But I can't stop thinking of the girl I adore She truly is amazing, She is all I want and more If I held your hand Could you walk away Or if I kissed your face Would you turn a to me and say I need you here, please don't walk away I breath you in, and I'm here to stay I don't want to be alone, so hold me tight Oh please just stay with me, baby this is our night Bridge And when i see your face Catch the glimmer in your eyes I think of a place Where it's just you and I Chorus If I held your hand Could you walk away Or if I kissed your face Would you turn a to me and say I need you here, please don't walk away I breath you in, and I'm here to stay I don't want to be alone, so hold me tight Oh please just stay with me, baby this is our night Yeah this is our night End Needs some work but yeah thats what I have so far... Edited October 5, 2011 by jacob c(:
jacob c(: Posted October 5, 2011 Author Posted October 5, 2011 Yeah like just wanna make the bridge more interesting lol n I don't think the second verse really goes well in this song... hmmm.... lol...
Guest Vampire Puppet Posted October 5, 2011 Posted October 5, 2011 second verse maybe a bit yeah, but i dont see a problem with the bridge
jacob c(: Posted October 5, 2011 Author Posted October 5, 2011 Definitely the second verse but the bridge is just missing something... idk what... but I'll find it haha...
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