My recent poem..

[Mido.Kilmy.Kotoba]

Maybe not the best piece.. But if you think it's ok ask me to add more. ^///^"

Anyway tell me waht do u think?

 

 

The more feelings the less words

Like I couldn't think about these two at once

I see the dolls in melancholic dance

Macabre is coming, hiting in their heads,

Nothing but ignorance

By force unknown they're led

 

Dream dance my child, don't ever wake

Up there is something you don't wanna know

It's just a place where you could go

 

The risk which no one wants to take

It's home for thinkers on their own

Where on their own are they forsaken

 

You say they're lonly and you are right

It's a disease to your own heart they'll spread

avert your gaze when skies are burning red

As through the evening, calling from the night

Love coloured is like death cause dead

Are those who can't come back to lives they had.

[bloodshot69]

Nice piece yo keep it up!!

[hi-c]

excellent job!XD