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So here's this rough draft of a song I've been writing... It came out a freestyling session, where I just wrote what's on my mind.

Anyways, hope y'all like it. The lyrics would probably be whispered sung, not screamed. A bit like Hurt, by Nine Inch Nails. Tell me if it's good or not.

 

 

 

Limerence

 

 

Let your anger propel you

Let the answers come naturally

Let me protect you

I'll anchor you down passionately

 

The victim inside tells you I'm wrong

The poison's in your system/ you're too far gone

My very existence craves your every fibre of being

But you scream good riddance

When I deny my own feelings

 

I got the key to your obscene mind

I stand between you and your dreams

You got the need to strife for an unclean drive

You hand me the gun when I crave the need

 

Let your hatred spill out

Let the love come unnaturally

Let me fit in now

I'll close your eyes to reality

 

You fathom my every motive with a flick of the wrist

You fashion me into a demon with a hint of a kiss

My very atoms howl for your acts of love

But your life-long passion

Has always been denying me

 

I got the key to your obscene mind

I stand between you and your dreams

You got the need to strife for an unclean drive

You hand me the gun when I crave the need

Guest Emo4Lyf
Posted

Can't say I'm a fan, but then I can't say I'm king-critic either.

  • 3 weeks later...

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